Words of a Master Storyteller

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Writing novels has given me a renewed appreciation for songwriters. They often say as much in one page as I do in three hundred.So I thought it might be fun to try this hear, see and do thing with a few words from famous songwriter, Tom T. Hall. Who doesn’t remember the year that Clayton Delaney died?

In another song, “Homecoming,” Tom T. tells the story that covers several decades in one page, about six hundred words. And he does it with only one character speaking.

Tom T. Hall, the Storyteller

Humor me. See if you can see what Tom T. is telling us in the first verse, just fifty-two words, four lines.

Guess I should’ve written Dad, to let you know that I was coming home

I’ve been gone so many years, I didn’t realize you had a phone

Saw your cattle coming in, boy, they’re looking mighty fat and slick

Saw Fred at the service station, told me his wife is awful sick

What do you see in your mind’s eye with each line?

A son returns after being away for many years with no contact.

We know the approximate era because the dad did not have a phone when the son left

Daddy’s a farmer/rancher—but the bigger issue is the son making small talk to avoid speaking about the invisible barrier between them—his prolonged absence and his guilt.

Fred is probably a brother who has a sick wife. The brother has stayed behind with his father.

Do you have a vision of the father and son meeting for the first time in years? Where are they? What are they wearing? I see the father in overalls and one of those Hank Williams hats, the son in a loud western shirt with the top two or three snaps undone. The father is on the porch and the son is at the porch steps of a little farm house with a fig tree in the yard and a swing on the porch, a vine grows up a trellis.

Do you see the cattle? What kind are they? See the old service station?

Now skip to the fourth verse.

I’m sorry I couldn’t be here with you all when Momma passed away

I was on the road, and when they came and told me, it was just too late.

I drove by the grave to see her; boy, that sure is a pretty stone

I’m glad that Fred and Jan are here, it’s better than you being here alone.

Can you see the gravestone, the little country graveyard? The anguish on the son’s face, the disappointment and grief on the father’s?  And now we know that Fred is a brother.

Now the final verse (we’re skipping several good ones).

Well, Dad, I gotta go; we got a dance to work in Cartersville tonight

Let me take your number down, and I promise you I’ll write

Now you be good and don’t be chasin’ all those pretty women that you know

And, by the way, if you see Barbara Walker, tell her that I said hello.

Tom T. Hall at his Tennessee Home

We’re back to the guilty small talk, the awkward departure in order to return to a life the father does not approve of. And, of course, the old flame the son left behind. See the sweetheart’s face? See the forced smile on the son’s face disappear and a deep sadness fill his eyes as he mentions his old heartthrob?

Chuck Leddy, contributing editor to “Writer” magazine concludes in his review of Gottschall’s book, The Storytelling Animal, “Little wonder then that we seek to share our stories with others: Our brains are hard-wired to construct and absorb stories. Our love of story is what makes us human.”

Jonathan Gottschall seals the deal with these revealing words:  “Until the day we die, we are living the story of our lives. And, like a novel in process, our life stories are always changing and evolving, being edited, rewritten, and embellished by an unreliable narrator. We are, in large part, our personal stories.”

Now, go read. Oops. I forgot the ones who need to read this don’t read. I am preaching to the choir.  Marcel Proust called the moments of unity between writer and reader “that fruitful miracle of a communication in the midst of solitude.” To my readers, I say thanks for that fruitful miracle. And thanks for your kind comments.

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  • Doc Turner

    Had the honor of being on a cruise many years ago with tom T Hall and his wife, Crystal Gail, Tommy Overstreet and Bobby Bare. They were kind enough to give autographs and visit a little with an admiring college student.

  • What a terrific post, Jim.This is worth the read just for this little nugget: Marcel Proust called the moments of unity between writer and reader “that fruitful miracle of a communication in the midst of solitude.” This is why I have always been an avid reader and why I write, hoping to make that connection. You brought tears to my eyes and a smile to my lips.

  • Caleb Pirtle

    I’ve spent a lot of time with Tom T. Hall, back during the ’70s when we did several magazine pieces on the Nashville Sound. He’s one of my favorite people in the world. We go back to the days when he was getting Johnny Rodriguez out of a South Texas jail for stealing a goat. He cleaned Johnny up and talked Happy Shahan into giving Johnny a job singing on the stage of Alamo Village. Tom T. knew the young man hads potential, and he gave Johnny the best advice any songwriter ever received. He said. “Here’s all you have to do. Be honest. And make it rhyme.”

  • Gerald Crawford

    Jim, great story on Tom T. Hall, one of the best song writer story tellers in the world. Caleb and I had the pleasure of interviewing and photographing him several times for Southern Living back in the seventies and had an opportunity to visit his Fox Hollow home. A photograph of
    Tom T., Caleb and me is proudly hanging in my home.

  • Stephen Woodfin

    Jim, great blog. I am a big fan of songwriting in general and Tom T in particular. I am also already reading Rivers Flow, so I’ll get that review out before too long. SW

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